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Lover of the night
Cloaked in darkness
For your prevous form
To the wonder you are now

Even in the night
Or at least when the moon is full
Your markings shimmer
Leaving a warming glow

I could just catch you
And keep you for my own
But I will not fight you
I cannot harm you

I will not catch you
For you shouldn’t be kept
Something so beautiful
Deserves more then a cage

Looking so proude and noble
As you look to the moon
As you turn to look
I watch in wonder

Over you trot
Not afrade of me
You would not mind
Being with me

Umbreons cannot be caught
And are rarly seen
But if you do see one
Then they have picked you

I am one of the lucky few.
Yes well i created this poem for one of my friends drawings...this one>>>> [link]
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Dawn773 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2008  Student General Artist
My heart feels lighter after reading this... It's wonderful.
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ZaiakuSin Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thats good ^_^
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Dawn773 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Student General Artist
^^
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IchyCheshire Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006
<33333 it's really beautiful ^__^!!! (sorry for the late comment ^^")
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ZaiakuSin Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug: ^.^ (Its ok dont worrie)
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Satoe Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2006
:wow: You are such a great poet! A SUPERPOET!! :D :rofl: It is so beautiful... :happycry: Man I could read your poetry in evenings to calm my mind..and heart. :heart:
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ZaiakuSin Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks its a first time i heard somthing like that about my poems.....Thanks.....
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Bored-Yaoi Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2006
^ ^ That's very cool. I like it. Good job! ^__~
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